The villain in the story, Warner, offered her so, so, so much, and every time she refused him, told him to go to hell. I was so proud of her for that. But that was about it. I didn't like Adam, I didn't like Warner, the prose was very nice and imaginative but upon re-reading makes no sense and needs a tighter editor.
I don't know. It wasn't horrible, but it wasn't half as good as it could have been.